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gravity is a well  
but long before  Alice hits the water-covered bottom  
and swims to unknown  beauties  
she learns to fly while falling  
falling  
past the things that one would cling to  
past the anchors that they are  
past deluded people who would grab you, Alice  
if you let them  
if you wear big clothes
with grippy threads  
people with those swollen heads  
filled with sterile, crawling thoughts  
so heavy they can only live  
a life of upside down  
and off to the side of penalty flags  

keep drifting, Alice  
keep drifting  
prepare to be so ready  
so ready for any thing  
that you will never  sink  
but only fall forever in a glide  
so easy  
so alive  




Lancelot Price 2011 December 11
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it should be obvious enough

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:iconalecbell:
She's always been a hero of mine.An excellent piece of re-framing, Lance!
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:iconlancelotprice:
Thanks.

She and Wonderland have always been special to me.
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~Agnes-Arelia Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think this is the most beautiful thing I've read today and I've read a lot today. :)
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:iconlancelotprice:
Thank you, Ines. A wondeful compliment.

Thanks also for the faves.
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~Agnes-Arelia Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome. :)
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*halcyonshores Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant title and impeccable flow.
I hope many an Alice of this world will heed these words.
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:iconlancelotprice:
Thank you. Me, too.
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:iconegotisticalasshole:
i wanted to read this the moment i read its title. it has the loveliest sort of dreamy sense to it (because of how the lines flow without stopping), like a soft voice in the air.
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:iconlancelotprice:
Thanks, ohepi. I see you only have one poem up so far on your new account. I await more. :)
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