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Oh, those crows,
perceptive and wise and with a sense of time and season.
They know how emotional humans get
when Christmas comes.
What suckers they are for feeding the birds,
an act of love when they can give no love to others
The crows settle in apartment block parking lots
the way seagulls gather in shopping strips
next to fast food joints
or hover and flap in masses
on the scrapheaps of garbage scows
sent from the city
with the dregs of living
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Lancelot Price 2011 November 27

A riff based on Bark's piece, 'Days Before Christmas'. Started writing as soon as I read his. He's my muse today, it seems. You can find his here [link] if he's leaving "scraps" available for view.


A DD for Christmas day. An astonishing present. Total surprise. Thanks to 'Beccalicious'. :)

Thanks to everybody for reading and faving.
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
Ha! Well deserved. :frail:
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:iconlancelotprice:
Thank you, 'mOans'. [I wanted to call you by a real name or a nickname, but somehow, using only the first part of your username seemed inappropiate. ;) ]
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
One fellow calls me Who. I found that amusing. Making a nickname of this seems quite the fad. ;) How about Mo?

I learned from Barkie that your name is Lance. Do you prefer to be called by your name?
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Yes, Lance is fine. It's the nick for Lancelot, which is what shows on my profile page in the upper left corner or thereabouts. I pretty much always use my real name online. Crazy, perhaps, but I learned the courage to be me in real life; it was a long fight and I'm not ready to stop being me now.
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
Courage seems to be my watchword for the coming year. Last year, it was authenticity. But now I need to add courage so authenticity can become integrity. I am not trying for perfect. I am a severely human creature, a sort of Velveteen Woman, as it were. I am glad you won the long fight.

Lancelot is a lovely name. I am an Arthurian legend fan. My favorite version of the Lancelot story portrays him as Gwenhwyfar's hero, her devoted companion. That feels far truer, to me.
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The first Arthurian story I read, and still my favourite, was Sir Thomas Malory's Le Morte d'Arthur. The first version I had was abridged for children, but still had the core of it plus the story of Tristan and Isolde as well, and the Grail quest. It did include the affair of Lancelot and Arthur's wife and the "naked as a needle" description. Very surprising that made it through in those days of ridiculous censorship. Most of the other tales in the full version are peripheral to the main outline.
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:iconwh0rem0ans:
I came upon Mallory later. Stephen Lawhead's version is the one I liked for Lancelot. Lawhead is overly Christian, for my tastes and it enters the story repeatedly. Still, there is gold if you delve deep enough.
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The whole Holy Grail story is too religious for my taste, and I wish it were not attached to the story.

A modern Arthurian tale I very much like is The Crystal Cave, by Mary Stewart, a story centered on Merlin.
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I love crows. So nice poem.

:P
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:iconlancelotprice:
Thanks, Anthony. And good luck with your novel. I just don't have the persistence and self-discipline to write long works. Dammit. I always wanted to be a novelist.
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