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rip off the clothes and bandages  
there you are  
you and all your scars  
turn around  
let us see you  
yes  
yes  
yes  
you have lived  
you have lived  
thank your good luck  
you fortunate one  
so many never got the chance  
or took it if they did  
thank your good luck  
you fortunate one
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:iconlancelotprice:
I'm glad you liked it, Alec. And thank you for making it a favourite.
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:iconalecbell:
Always welcome, Lance :heart:
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:iconthetaoofchaos:
`thetaoofchaos Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
haha, yes i agree! i'm so attracted to the scars that say "i was there while it was happening!"

this is marvelous and clever.
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:iconlancelotprice:
Thank you.

Don't forget to watch out for "collateral damage".
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:iconthemadmulatto:
How much does a pair of soft and perfect hands say?
LOVE how this flowed.
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:iconlancelotprice:
Thanks, Michelle. I rarely write repeat lines as though they were choruses of a song, but that's how it came out here. I'm glad it worked for you.
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:iconthemadmulatto:
Well, I just recently did that myself thinking the same thing.
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:iconindiscord:
Scars are misunderstood, and beautiful.
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:iconlancelotprice:
They are often 'campaign ribbons' of existence.
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