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windshield
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Car Wash  
I sit behind the windshield  
as water floods the outside  
looking out as they look in  
I turn on the wipers  
just for fun  
As the window clears I see them  
With every windshield wipe  
I fade a bit  
And soon  
They cannot see me anymore  
and I am gone  


Nowhere  
Just as I began  




Lancelot Price 2014 January 16
Another one from January 16.
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This one surely deserves an :clap: :clap: :clap:
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LancelotPrice Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
:bow: :iconbowplz: :bow:
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alapip Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
analogy of an analog life
googling along now in a digital age

[sort of]  :) pip
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LancelotPrice Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
AnOther possibility. :)
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aldwarke Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
Wryly humorous. Made me smile especially when I read the final stanza.
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LancelotPrice Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
Yeah, I guess there are different ways it can be read. That's one of 'em. :)
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Bark Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Professional Writer
Good one, Lance.
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LancelotPrice Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
Thanks, Ron, and thanks for the fave, too. :)
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